Thursday May 3, 2007 (3)
I was not in class this week, as I had severe alarm clock malfunctions. However, I will reflect on what I intend to do for my essay rather than the material from class.
Experimental media is...
the use of any medium to reach an audience in a way that would not be possible using a conventional method of filmmaking.
I thought of this for my thesis, and it seems a bit weak. I want feedback on it, and I believe it really could be a good essay if my thesis gets stronger and more precise. I need to be able to prove my idea, to really convince someone who might not be sure that I am telling the truth. I believe my statement is true, but that hardly matters. What I need to be sure of, is that at the end of the essay, you believe it's true as well.
Experimental media is...
the use of any medium to reach an audience in a way that would not be possible using a conventional method of filmmaking.
I thought of this for my thesis, and it seems a bit weak. I want feedback on it, and I believe it really could be a good essay if my thesis gets stronger and more precise. I need to be able to prove my idea, to really convince someone who might not be sure that I am telling the truth. I believe my statement is true, but that hardly matters. What I need to be sure of, is that at the end of the essay, you believe it's true as well.

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